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The Ribbony

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:icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz:
Coloured pencils and a real ribbon ;)
based on picture from Catalog Hair Trendy

Kredki i wstążka ;)
bazowane na zdjęciu z katalogu Hair Trendy.

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Image size
1758x1252px 366.62 KB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D5000
Shutter Speed
1/30 second
Aperture
F/4.8
Focal Length
45 mm
ISO Speed
1000
Date Taken
May 3, 2011, 1:57:34 PM
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Apocolypse-Eternity's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

To start, I love the rich detail of highlighting and color blending put into this piece. The flow and shape of the hair is executed beautifully, and the shading on it is nice as well. As for the skin, it's smooth and has great definition. Overall I love this piece as a whole.

My only issue is the ribbon. Being the work's namesake, I expected it to pop out from behind the hair. The ribbon's red is a bit flat, and could have a little more shadow and lightness as it bends. The same technique that you used in the hair could be applied to the ribbon as well. Maybe that was your intention, but the result looks a little awkward.

Again, I really like this a lot :')